ScytheSong
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Sleepyscholar of Shentian Having gotten through the Characters chapter, everything is looking good to me (I'm not detail-oriented enough to be a proofreader), with one exception. As someone who studied some Chinese history, Mandarin as a title for the Occupation feels jarringly anachronistic for a Song-era Shi DaFu -- Magistrate or Bureaucrat might be a better term.